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A poem I wrote for :iconpoetryplease:'s Challenge# 33. It's a villanelle with a holiday element. It also goes by the title, "Kiss Me Underneath the Mistletoe", in Writerscafe.

Special thanks to my muse, :iconmomoryuji: , and to :icondiscordia24:
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Price and suffice work splendidly together. However, they do not rhyme with eyes, reprise, lies, and dies. You should also put a ' right before the word "morrow". I know what you mean, as I'm sure everyone does, but it would be techinically correct.

Otherwise, you followed the directions perfectly, and I like the poem. :D